יום חמישי, 14 במאי 2009

School Uniform

Alot of schools required uniform.
They binding the students to show up to school with the same shirt, in some of the schools its even including pants and shoes, full uniform.
Every morning the children must show up with school uniform or they will be punished or not allowed to enter school.
Some of the schools require symbole and are asking to be showen up with suit.
You can get the uniform in the colors the school has chosen for you.
Some of the schools gives you a full access to all of the colors and some are limit them.


The uniform might help the children in a few ways.
Not every body have money to buy fancy clothes, children like to scorn of each other, if they see someone that comes in humble look they might hurt his feelings by denigrating him.
When school is limting the clothes to an uniform they don't have to worry about what others will say and think about them.
Altough school with out a uniform can cause alot of lateness between the students.
When a child stands infront of his closet in the morning, he isn't always sure what to choose, on this action his spending alot of time, beacuse of this time spending he late to school and hurts himself.


Sometimes the uniform may hurt the students too,
some children want to pick their own clothes and show-up to school in their way.
When the school limtis the access they are not able to do it.
It may hurt their moral to show-up to school too.
When you are dressing up in the morning you sometimes get bored of the uniform and you want to pick up something else.
Because you aren't able to do it, you show-up to school without zest.
Something that may hurt your moral to study.


I dont think we should cancel the school uniform.
We need to look on others to, those who can't buy fancy clothes and those who compete other kids.
Maybe schools should think about another way to get into the children, maybe a more fashioned uniform that may help to those who don't like the regular uniform.

יום חמישי, 26 בפברואר 2009

Homework.

26/2/09
Homework is very widely exepeted among teachers in the world.
Some pepol are opposed to homework in the claim that homework is enslaving and hurts them. Ben Berrfato claims that homework is not necessary, only classwork.
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In my opinion, homework is very important. Ben's describes the homework in such a bad way, children must practise to get to results beacuse its helping them to think more clearly and the work get int there heads.
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It's not only practise it amployment to. Ben is misjuding the homework, he is talking about slavery homework.
Its not slavery , if he doesn't want he doesn't have to make them, but it's his future
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Homework help to get good grades and sucess. Ben shows us the slaving issue but it is a mistake to call homework "slavery".It is made to help you only,
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Daphna

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Out space

During the last century, The humen(ww. - humanity) has been trying to get into the(מיותר) space. Get into(ww. - exploring) space cost(gr. - costs) alot of money and the risk is huge.
It's pepol(sp. - people's) life(gr. - lives) we're talking about and not just useless experiment(s).

Some of the pepol(sp.) think that getting out of earth its(ww. - is) dangerous and useless.
That it's spending(phr. and ww. - a waste of...) of time and money. On the other hand, alot of pepol(sp.) think that it's importent(sp.) to explore atoher(ww. - other) worlds. It's an(ww. - a) hard issue that will be(מיותר) contiue to be discuess(gr. - discussed) many years in the future.

Its cost(gr. - It costs) alot of money to travel to the(מיותר) out(er) space,(Start a new sentence) in(ww. - On) the other hand, it really might help the(מיותר) humen(sp.) been(מיותר) kind in the future in many ways, fuel, water and many atoher stuff(מיותר). Its risking pepol(sp. - people's) life(gr. - lives) too, which is dangerous but its there(sp. - their) choice, they like to do that.

I think that we need to go out (to) space. Earth will not be here for ever and we need to find (a)replacement, in case somthing will happen, we cant just die, (Start a new sentence here) we may find an atoher(ww. - another) planet to leave(ww. - live) on it(מיותר). Its the right thing to do.
Again, you are not saying much. You remain on the surface without explaining clearly what exactly you mean. You repeat the same 2 arguments and do not introduce new ones. Also, your organization needs some work. When you write an essay presenting opinions for and against an issue, you use the 2nd paragraph, for example, to present all the arguments for and the next one, to present all the arguments against. You don't onlt present arguments, you explain them, too. I would read the instructions in our forum more carefully, if I were you....
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Daphna

יום חמישי, 5 בפברואר 2009

Peer perssure

Today, a lot of teenagers suffer from peer pressure .This problem is very widespread .Teens around the world handle peer pressure and try to find a solution.
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There are a lot of arguments between teenagers on this issue. Students are facing a lot of peer pressure problems as drugs ,theft and a lot more subjects. In most of the cases, kids tend to be naive and surrender to peer pressure. The excitement attract(gr. - attracts) them and they just make(ww. - do) it.
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In my opinion, there is no reason to be affect(ed) by peer pressure. Teenagers have to make their own decision and find a way to cope with there problems.


I'm sorry, but this is not an essay, it's a paragraph at the most. Apart from the first and last paragraphs, there is not much there. You will have to make an effort to elaborate on your ideas.

יום חמישי, 15 בינואר 2009

15.1.09
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Dear Janet,
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It's silly of you to do somthing that hurts you. I relate to your problom. A lot of pupils have this problom.You have to deal with it. If it hurts you, you have to stop letting your friends copy from you.
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I suggest you talk with you friends and tell them that you don't want to let them copy beacuse you are getting low grades. When your friends copy from you, it's difficult for you to focus on your exam. This kind of thing happens alot in life. You have to know how to deal with it.
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I don't believe your friends will stop hanging out with you if you ask from them to stop copying from you . If they do ,so they are not your real friends ,they are just using you.I wouldn't like to have friends who are using me for somthing.You might try talking with them and finding a soultion for your problom .It might break your friendship ,but you have to deal with it and get it over with.
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Good luck.
Sean

יום רביעי, 7 בינואר 2009

War in Gaza

Why do I support the war in Gaza?
Isreal has been bombed by Gaza for eight years, Hamas are killing poor people who did nothing to them. We can't just sit there and do nothing. The world supports the HAMAS?! It is a terrorist organization, nothing else. They show the world only what they like to show, with no respect or humanity. We have done nothing wrong. All we want is to live in peace.Hamas is using his civilians, You cant blame us. They are killing our civilians too. We wont stop until they stop.
Sean.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MUI7iNEYGvk