31/12/08
Dear Sara,
Hi, How are you?How on(ww. - is) school ? I hope everything is going well . I have a funny story to tell you. .
Dear Sara,
Hi, How are you?How on(ww. - is) school ? I hope everything is going well . I have a funny story to tell you. .
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Last Sunday I was playing soccer with my friends at Kugel ,Well we played since 4 Oclock and everything was wonderful , I was runing alot and I was very tired,We kept playing until it got dark . We kept playing in the darkness beacuse we wanted to stay.
You see, Its really boring at home I Got(ww. - have) nothing to do instead of watching TV or playing on the computer . So, we decided to stay and keep playing soccer. ,We played for a while and suddenly the ball desappeared. , It was my friend Lirane's ball so we felt bad to leave him alone without the ball. ,We decided to go and look for the ball all over this huge place, altough it seem(ed) hopeless. ,We was(gr. - were) searching after the ball for a whole hour ! We were disappointed. ,After we sat little bit we decided it was hopeless and maybe tommorow at school we are going(gr. - ww. - could) to(מיותר) find the ball, when the sun will shine(phr. - in day light).
I tought(sp.) to my self "Oh well ,It's not my ball ".
When we already(מיותר) left the place I noticed something in the darkness. ,I went to see what it was ,and there it was ! i found Liran's ball. it was kinda exciting to find the ball after so much time. ,I was running(gr. - ran) on to my friends with the ball to show them I found it but I have not(gr. - didn't) notice the lamp in my way and I knocked my head into the lamp., My friends laughed at me alot. ,Even I laughed at my self .
Any way It was painfull .I will try to be more careful in the future I hope it doesn't happen to you
Last Sunday I was playing soccer with my friends at Kugel ,Well we played since 4 Oclock and everything was wonderful , I was runing alot and I was very tired,We kept playing until it got dark . We kept playing in the darkness beacuse we wanted to stay.
You see, Its really boring at home I Got(ww. - have) nothing to do instead of watching TV or playing on the computer . So, we decided to stay and keep playing soccer. ,We played for a while and suddenly the ball desappeared. , It was my friend Lirane's ball so we felt bad to leave him alone without the ball. ,We decided to go and look for the ball all over this huge place, altough it seem(ed) hopeless. ,We was(gr. - were) searching after the ball for a whole hour ! We were disappointed. ,After we sat little bit we decided it was hopeless and maybe tommorow at school we are going(gr. - ww. - could) to(מיותר) find the ball, when the sun will shine(phr. - in day light).
I tought(sp.) to my self "Oh well ,It's not my ball ".
When we already(מיותר) left the place I noticed something in the darkness. ,I went to see what it was ,and there it was ! i found Liran's ball. it was kinda exciting to find the ball after so much time. ,I was running(gr. - ran) on to my friends with the ball to show them I found it but I have not(gr. - didn't) notice the lamp in my way and I knocked my head into the lamp., My friends laughed at me alot. ,Even I laughed at my self .
Any way It was painfull .I will try to be more careful in the future I hope it doesn't happen to you
With Love,
Sean.
